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Why are you doing this to me?
How can you be so mean to me?

The bottle is shaking
It's too much to contain

What did I ever to you to deserve this?
Can you not see my tears?

The bottle is shaking
It's too much to contain

Don't you want to be my friend?
Don't you want to love me?
Do you even know what you're doing to me?

The bottle is shaking
It's too much to contain

I am at my limit
I can't hold it down any more
I'm starting to go mad

The bottle is shaking
It's too much to contain

I'm starting to see red

The glass is starting to crack
The valve is broken

I feel . . . angry

The glass expands
She comes forth
She comes to play


It's not fair!
It's just not fair!
It's all their fault!
I won't be pushed around anymore!

You will understand!
I'll make you understand my tears!
I will make you scream!
Wrath will hang his cloak in shame!
Tonight I am free!
I'll make it worth while it lasts!

Come out!

Be Mine!

Come to me!

Love me!

You will Love me!

You're going to Love me!

. . . . . . . .

Now the bottle is broken
The beast has been set free
The shards of a cage lay in my mind
My anger is gone and so is she
How cruel the world can be
As She just wanted to play
Here's a poem inspired by Fluttershy's EPIC breakdown at the Grand Galloping Gala. You know you just want to give her a big hug

This is actually the updated version of my poem "Rage of Gaia - Fluttershy's Fire" This time I've made her feelings much more clearer

Here's my little theory behind Fluttershy's rage:

All of her anger is like one giant mental bottle, any anger she feels goes into the bottle and is locked tight. However, the bottle has a pressure valve and she can control when the event calls for it (Dragonshy, The Stare Master)

And in Return of Harmony part 2, that was the only time she took the cap of willingly, which is how she was able to nearly match RD's speed. The sheer idea of Discord winning was enough to make her take the cap off willingly

Comments are appreciated ^^

Fluttershy is the property of :iconfyre-flye:

Hope u like it ^^

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Benusamuneth Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014
Madoka I understand

but how is this transformers or he Colbert report?
ISMFOFWitMatches Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Inspiration! *goes off to write song*
Pikachu-Kitty Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
FlutterShy's feelings do sound clearer. It also reminds me of myself when I get frustrated- I put my anger somewhere and try to ignore what's making me angry, but then there are the times I unleash my anger when I don't mean to.

Overall, it is a great poem.
SPDUDE18 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
Ya think it's nerdy I wrote a poem about ponies?

Do you want to look at my other Witch poems?
Pikachu-Kitty Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah. It isn't nerdy.

I'll take a look.
TehJadeh Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student General Artist
As I said before, this gave me chills! It definitely is a different side to Fluttershy. Great work, keep it up^^
SPDUDE18 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
Thanks. Don't really know if I'll write one for each of the breakdowns (maybe Twilight)
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