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Craving Canine

I am a dog

I am a normal dog

All the things a dog can do

Beg!

Fetch!

Sit!

Speak!

Roll over!

Stand!

I can do all those things

I am a good girl

I have always been one

They have always said that

But there's something wrong

I'm still hungry

I crave something more

Do they not see it?

It's all that I want

The only thing I want

To be loved

Love is simple and everything

Don't they see my cry?

Why don't they love me?

I crave for them

They crave for me

I hunger for Love

I want to be Loved

Not pretending

Loved by all

Loved forever
Here's my next poem, written by the Canine Witch, Uhrmann! I personally think this isn't my strongest one since I really didn't have a lot to work with. Rest assured, my next poem (Oktavia) will be a strong one.

Uhrmann
"The canine witch (has not debuted), with a craving nature. She has taken on the form of a dog in the vain hope of being loved by all. Humans who enter her barrier can't help but embrace her in concern. One hoping to defeat her can do so by feigning love."

I don't know Madoka Magica and Uhrmann, SHAFT does.

Hope u like it :)
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Airmd Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
This one is good, but as you said before, I don't think its your strongest. Although I find the "I am a good girl" line adorable for some reason. But yes, although not your strongest, I still think it's rather good.
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Grand-Master-Destros Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011
These poems are awesome. Keep up the good work! ^^
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